Hi Jessica, Wow what a fantastic poem! I really like that it’s short and clear and that the sentences you chose reflect not only the tragedy of those who went to war but also their families that they left behind. Thank you (: From Mrs J
Kia Ora Jessica Your poem is amazing! It made me think about all of the people that risked their lives for others. I really like the picture in the background as well. Have you thought about trying a difrent couler so the words stand out more
Jess, this is a lovely poem. I love the first line, "War is waste" because that is so true. The rest of your poem supports that idea by covering the loss of young men and woman. I also love the red poppy background. A great start to learning@home, Jess.
Hi Jessica,
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I really like that it’s short and clear and that the sentences you chose reflect not only the tragedy of those who went to war but also their families that they left behind. Thank you (:
From Mrs J
Kia Ora Jessica
ReplyDeleteYour poem is amazing! It made me think about all of the people that risked their lives for others. I really like the picture in the background as well. Have you thought about trying a difrent couler so the words stand out more
Jess, this is a lovely poem. I love the first line, "War is waste" because that is so true. The rest of your poem supports that idea by covering the loss of young men and woman. I also love the red poppy background. A great start to learning@home, Jess.
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